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Submitted: July 30, 2012
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toothless walking cycleby ~ryuuminari

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Critique by ~lemonkylie Aug 9, 2012, 10:30:41 AM

me gusta mucho como animas, eres super genial, sabes manejarte bien en las lineas, me encanta la manera que camina con sus patitas chuecas ( como mi perro! <3).
creo que abajo, en las patas hay un ruido, fuera de eso, está muy bien fluido y siento que si las pupilas se quedaran en un punto fijo funcionaria mucho mejor aún
creo que el haber tomado la decsision de estudiar animación fue muy bueno para ti, ya que al ver tus trabajos quede muy impactada,son realmente buenos, además que pintas muy bonito y de vedad te felicito, bienvenida a la carrera!:3

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Critique by *Kiytt Jul 30, 2012, 9:10:32 PM

The first thing I noticed about this animation was how much it really looked like Toothless. You got all the details right and its enough detail to know its toothless but not so much detail that it looks bad; its a perfect amount. I did notice a few mistakes on the animation. The inner front foot or the left foot looks almost backwards or to its side. Now, I'm not sure if you did that on purpose or not but the foot should be facing forward or to the same direction that all the feet are facing. The animation is smooth but I think you should have added a few more frames for the tail or decreased the distance the tail swings so it looks smother. Overall this is animation is great, I would really enjoy seeing more animations from you like this.